Thursday, June 4, 2009
Introduction to "My first Fishing Experience"
The next story I have include in my e-portfolio is one of the journal entries I wrote for class.” My first Fishing Experience” is an essay that I enjoyed writing because it was about a very memorable experience I had. I grew in my writing dialogue abilities in this journal. “ ‘ Why do we have to get up early? I’m so tired!’ I complained while yarning.” I hope you enjoy this tale.
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The last sentence in the paragraph is a real hooker. I mean that in a way that it catches the reader's attention and makes the reader want to read more of your writing.
ReplyDeleteSomething to note: In the first sentence, the word "include" should be written in the past tense (included).